PATIENCE

IS THAT YOU?
OR AM I SIMPLY REMEMBERING?
YOUR FACE IS NOT SO CLEAR NOW
YOUR VOICE, I CAN STILL HEAR WITH CLARITY
I WONDER IF YOU STILL WEAR YOUR SILLY RAIN HAT, AND BAGGY JEANS
DO YOU THINK ABOUT YOUR PAST, OR HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN THOSE WHO STILL LOVE YOU?
SOMEWHERE IN THE UNIVERSE YOUR CANDLE STILL BURNS
ONE DAY I HOPE FOR YOUR RETURN
PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE…

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2 comments on “PATIENCE

  1. Bart Wolffe says:

    I like this a lot. Very succinct and clear. Says a great deal in its sub-text. I wonder if you need the last line, though? It’s already in the title.

  2. caroray78 says:

    Reading it back, you’re right; last line is not necessary. Has more impact without it.
    Thank you Bart

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